tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post2481132095326126338..comments2024-03-25T09:26:08.658-06:00Comments on Chaotically Yours: 100 Word Challenge: The Hungry HourL. M. Leffewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-10302381106614552472011-08-29T15:53:55.117-06:002011-08-29T15:53:55.117-06:00Thank you all for the wonderful comments.Thank you all for the wonderful comments.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-77660897133146575312011-08-28T12:37:51.813-06:002011-08-28T12:37:51.813-06:00Amazing...the loss is palpable. Like Julie, I imag...Amazing...the loss is palpable. Like Julie, I imagine myself in the main character's place, and I feel pain and loneliness. Such a gift to be able to evoke such emotion from so few words. Great job, and thanks so much for linking up with us!Katie @ Chicken Noodle Gravyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02852793993330125727noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-45378873120003149342011-08-27T14:33:07.021-06:002011-08-27T14:33:07.021-06:00This made me imagine myself in this her place so i...This made me imagine myself in this her place so it made me oh so sad. this depth of loss is hard to explain but you did a good job of doing it.julie moorehttp://www.picsprayerspompoms.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-18673693839718983022011-08-27T14:09:23.812-06:002011-08-27T14:09:23.812-06:00Wow, feeling the vivid loss of something that she ...Wow, feeling the vivid loss of something that she had to get used to in the first place? Perfectly put together.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-15041544286533560112011-08-27T08:33:38.776-06:002011-08-27T08:33:38.776-06:00I think you found the perfect way to convey her em...I think you found the perfect way to convey her emptiness and loss. Who can't imagine that loving reassurance in the dark of night and then feel the loss at its absence? Very moving.Mayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03485338098212307793noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-37906633238600580672011-05-31T11:12:02.274-06:002011-05-31T11:12:02.274-06:00This comment has been removed by a blog administrator.VVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08273669841835738893noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-54844973292659027652011-05-28T11:14:52.723-06:002011-05-28T11:14:52.723-06:00"no words - thank you."
You're welc..."no words - thank you."<br /><br />You're welcome. Thank you for commenting.<br /><br />"I find this very poignant and can definitely take this one to heart. Thanks for sharing!"<br /><br />Thanks so much. I felt like I wasn't making as much of impact as I'd wanted, so I'm glad to hear people are getting something out of it.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-85214381087446904922011-05-28T11:09:29.024-06:002011-05-28T11:09:29.024-06:00no words - thank you.no words - thank you.PurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-40557383267761603102011-05-26T14:26:48.566-06:002011-05-26T14:26:48.566-06:00Wow, excellent write. Great imagery!Wow, excellent write. Great imagery!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17792036091186754290noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-51657326155944063562011-05-26T12:25:30.010-06:002011-05-26T12:25:30.010-06:00I find this very poignant and can definitely take ...I find this very poignant and can definitely take this one to heart. Thanks for sharing!Mhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04688080988902950436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-28605704651286973152011-05-26T09:52:29.626-06:002011-05-26T09:52:29.626-06:00Thank you both for the lovely comments and the wel...Thank you both for the lovely comments and the welcome.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-3496655189452328692011-05-26T08:41:42.081-06:002011-05-26T08:41:42.081-06:00You do create a vivid portrait of a lost love.
W...You do create a vivid portrait of a lost love. <br /><br />Welcome to the Challenge.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-71495289731988891562011-05-25T18:54:17.309-06:002011-05-25T18:54:17.309-06:00I love this. The image you create is so evocative....I love this. The image you create is so evocative. I can feel her pain, see her lying there alone.<br /><br />Awesome. Welcome to the 100 Word challengeCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.com