tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post8044341396590063146..comments2024-03-25T09:26:08.658-06:00Comments on Chaotically Yours: Red Writing Hood: Settling ScoresL. M. Leffewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-40496925739442462272012-02-24T19:11:01.335-07:002012-02-24T19:11:01.335-07:00Blarg!Blarg!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-36932783932306868282012-02-24T19:07:34.253-07:002012-02-24T19:07:34.253-07:00I imagine every victim wishes they had a Gabriel. ...I imagine every victim wishes they had a Gabriel. I like the play on the names.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-11032965286357736622012-02-24T19:02:05.532-07:002012-02-24T19:02:05.532-07:00Gabriel does have a bit of a chivalrous streak. He...Gabriel does have a bit of a chivalrous streak. He'll deny it and he does it pretty well, but....<br /><br />Thanks for for stopping by. :)L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-43027500551553051902012-02-24T18:55:38.783-07:002012-02-24T18:55:38.783-07:00I just love this and how well it goes with your pr...I just love this and how well it goes with your previous post. Chivalry is not dead!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-54244469646805074412012-02-24T16:32:14.499-07:002012-02-24T16:32:14.499-07:00Me likes! Vengeance is mine sayeth the man with th...Me likes! Vengeance is mine sayeth the man with the switchblade!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-24688800087821781982012-02-24T13:49:34.126-07:002012-02-24T13:49:34.126-07:00Thank you and thank you for catching that ugly-stu...Thank you and thank you for catching that ugly-stumbly-"again" at the end. I think I had never again/ever again in there at one point and disappeared it during an edit. So it's back. :)L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-14470679378040657582012-02-24T13:38:50.019-07:002012-02-24T13:38:50.019-07:00I read the other one first, and glad I did! This ...I read the other one first, and glad I did! This would have seemed really strange on its own.<br />As it is, I love it - the way he bides his time, and plays everything out so calmly, on the outside anyways. Revealing my own violent streak, this is such a perfect punishment for sam-the-abuser. or any-man-the-abuser, really. <br />concrit - not sure that the "... tell anyone anything about you. Again." line works. putting Again by itself after a period makes it sound more like, "I'm going to cut off your balls... again." Maybe Never again instead?L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.com