tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post1668112409616613040..comments2024-03-25T09:26:08.658-06:00Comments on Chaotically Yours: The King Is DeadL. M. Leffewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-84608908984575025712014-07-21T10:42:10.362-06:002014-07-21T10:42:10.362-06:00Speechless is good. :) Glad you enjoyed.Speechless is good. :) Glad you enjoyed.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-44928571834218720432014-07-09T08:48:32.813-06:002014-07-09T08:48:32.813-06:00Oh...wow... I am speechless...
That was incredib...Oh...wow... I am speechless...<br /><br /><br />That was incredibly written. (And I hope they get away from the new kind.)L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-34802888936101993912014-03-20T20:01:07.029-06:002014-03-20T20:01:07.029-06:00It's a sad reality.
I'm glad you stopped...It's a sad reality. <br /><br />I'm glad you stopped by.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-41804251873299996892014-03-20T20:00:43.688-06:002014-03-20T20:00:43.688-06:00Thanks so much.Thanks so much.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-42890571061375185082014-03-20T19:51:40.581-06:002014-03-20T19:51:40.581-06:00Very nicely done!Very nicely done!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-2262210199970215142014-03-10T10:21:04.394-06:002014-03-10T10:21:04.394-06:00Wow ... I'm really sorry I missed this post un...Wow ... I'm really sorry I missed this post until now. Unfortunately those ugly and destructive habits pass their way down to the "prince." <br /><br />Especially liked, "I don't tell him love is finite. And fragile. It can be bruised, broken, can seep out of the body like blood from a wound."L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-53727553398072453802014-03-10T08:39:28.468-06:002014-03-10T08:39:28.468-06:00this is simply too good, love the repetition. Grea...this is simply too good, love the repetition. Great imagery and details. many favorites here but - "My brother stands rigid, red faced, clenched fists. He sucks in air like a desert dweller does water." Great line. I missed it reading before.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-30010267890813146202014-03-03T11:38:49.898-07:002014-03-03T11:38:49.898-07:00I agree with SAM - the repetition is brilliant. I&...I agree with SAM - the repetition is brilliant. I'm a huge fan of repetition... Welcome to our world of prompts and thank you so much for linking up!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-12287320975763101662014-03-03T07:09:00.947-07:002014-03-03T07:09:00.947-07:00The king's mantel is passed to the son... very...The king's mantel is passed to the son... very powerful. I agree with Stephanie and Joe, the repeated phrase carries along the tension nicely.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-70817681764360110342014-03-02T17:24:45.245-07:002014-03-02T17:24:45.245-07:00Yikes! The king is strong in that brother. I lik...Yikes! The king is strong in that brother. I liked this - a lot. The take on the prompt is clever, the images are vivid, and the repetition ties it all together beautifully.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-36004146346649050342014-03-01T22:40:47.770-07:002014-03-01T22:40:47.770-07:00Your use of repetition really really gave an added...Your use of repetition really really gave an added creepiness to the story, and the ending line sealed it. Wow!L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.com