tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post8584520585385434794..comments2024-03-25T09:26:08.658-06:00Comments on Chaotically Yours: A Georgia InterludeL. M. Leffewhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-61192510385559079902011-06-19T17:16:00.636-06:002011-06-19T17:16:00.636-06:00I enjoyed the story line. I was looking forward to...I enjoyed the story line. I was looking forward to seeing how you were going to bring the young boy into it.<br /><br />Your descriptions were great, too!<br />"sweat....tickling like insect legs"<br />"...the sheen of tears onhis cheek."<br />"..voice so tinny and faint the cicadas nearly drowned him out."<br /><br />Thank you!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-43842862823374616712011-06-19T16:49:47.974-06:002011-06-19T16:49:47.974-06:00This was a wonderful piece - Good write!This was a wonderful piece - Good write!Carlhttp://stillfugue.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-36105108889683405972011-06-19T16:43:15.775-06:002011-06-19T16:43:15.775-06:00This was wonderfully heartfelt. The anguish of the...<i>This was wonderfully heartfelt. The anguish of the little boy and the loss of his family. A family who in the end were haunted by his loss.<br /><br />Loved the way the little boy recognized a kindred spirit in Miz Jeanette. (Hugs) Indigo</i><br /><br />Thank you. <br /><br />Miz Jeanette was a surprise. She came out of nowhere, but I think she'll be one of those peripheral characters who will add an interesting and human element. <br /><br />Hopefully, I'll get to know her as I spend a little more time with Kora's history.L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-49727077001469796092011-06-19T16:37:31.320-06:002011-06-19T16:37:31.320-06:00This was a great read, no leniency needed.
Good l...<i>This was a great read, no leniency needed.<br /><br />Good luck with your move.</i><br /><br />Thank you and thank you. <br /><br />We're not going far (three hours/different city/same state) and the husband's already working/living there, so we've been moving piecemeal. But the big Uhaul Day is coming up. (And I'm ready to get it done so I can fully clean this apartment, say good riddance, and start moving forward on other projects.)L. M. Leffewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03622710354642535249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-17276074180695285172011-06-19T13:48:30.832-06:002011-06-19T13:48:30.832-06:00This was wonderfully heartfelt. The anguish of the...This was wonderfully heartfelt. The anguish of the little boy and the loss of his family. A family who in the end were haunted by his loss.<br /><br />Loved the way the little boy recognized a kindred spirit in Miz Jeanette. (Hugs) IndigoSage Ravenwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17143502548162174269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6701215672753702984.post-14482682252839552972011-06-19T13:11:42.578-06:002011-06-19T13:11:42.578-06:00Oh, the poor little boy. What a wonderful story a...Oh, the poor little boy. What a wonderful story and despite being sad there is still such tenderness that gives a strange uplifting feel to it. This was a great read, no leniency needed. <br /><br />Good luck with your move.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com