“I
think you should leave,” she says, and she doesn’t know why, because a
court sealed envelope run door-to-door by Sheriff Jackson hasn’t stopped
Mike and she doubts her words will.
Mike
grins—that feral cat grin that once made her feel wanted but now just
makes her back and legs ache with the memory of bruises—and nearly
breaks the hinge off the door as he pushes into the living room, pushes
into her space, with his hand raised.
But
she’s been practicing, three times a week in class and an hour every
day on her own in the most claustrophobic spaces she can find, because
Mike knows just how to use his bulk and the length of his limbs to make
her feel like rolling over and playing dead.
Heart Monitor via Flickr - brykmantra |
She
throws up her left arm, catches his jarring blow and steps into him,
putting the force of her body behind the knuckle she jabs into his
throat.
His bugged eyes make her think of old Bugs Bunny cartoons and she can’t help but laugh a little at his strangled gag and the way his fingers scrabble at his throat as though they could uncrush his windpipe, because now she’s remembering the reedy blip of a heart monitor and the bitter-cold taste of metal in her mouth, keeping her jaw shut tight.
His bugged eyes make her think of old Bugs Bunny cartoons and she can’t help but laugh a little at his strangled gag and the way his fingers scrabble at his throat as though they could uncrush his windpipe, because now she’s remembering the reedy blip of a heart monitor and the bitter-cold taste of metal in her mouth, keeping her jaw shut tight.
8 comments:
I really like the phrase fear blown pupils.
--Wendy from writing group
Wow! The ultimate revenge and the ultimate ass-kicking. I love this, love the thought of her taking her fate into her own hands and learning how to defend herself.
Loved this line: "that feral cat grin that once made her feel wanted but now just makes her back and legs ache with the memory of bruises" ...it made me pull for your heroine even more!
Thanks for linking up with us.
Wow! I'm wanting more...what happens next??
Powerful! I thought the lead-in was really well-done -- that first sentence tells you everything you need to know.
The ending sentence has such victory and determination in it. Excellent.
Thank you.
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed. And thanks for providing the space to link up. :)
One of these days...maybe I'll know. :)
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